I am a Year 5 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mrs Agnew.
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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Tuesday, 30 June 2020
The Glum tree
I feel cold because my leaves are like a warm blanket
to me but now they are all gone. I have to sleep cold on freezing nights. I wish they would never fall off during winter. The freezing cold makes me feel that I am in Antarctica. I don't like it when people trample my leaves. I feel so sad :( I also don’t like it when people climb over my naked body. It feels like cockroaches crawling all over me. Pinecone trees laugh at me because I am bare and they’re not. I feel so bad for my leaves on the ground because they are crushed and crumpled by the unforgiving winter weather.
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Tuesday, 12 September 2017
Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?
Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.
I believe cutting down trees is so bad because we will have no oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals and birds' home.They will become extinct. Some of the birds will migrate to another country.The cave men will not have food and shelter. Also cutting down trees causes erosion. The soil will get washed away. We will get sunburn because we will have no shade.
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed.
By Daniel
I believe cutting down trees is so bad because we will have no oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals and birds' home.They will become extinct. Some of the birds will migrate to another country.The cave men will not have food and shelter. Also cutting down trees causes erosion. The soil will get washed away. We will get sunburn because we will have no shade.
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed.
By Daniel
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Writing
Tuesday, 20 June 2017
Our Autumn Tree
The Autumn Tree looks beautiful and colourful. The Twirling Twirling Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and gold and yellow and brown leaves are gliding, fluttering and floating softly to the ground. The autumn tree is slowly losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare. There will be nothing left for them to wear.
By Daniel
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Monday, 10 April 2017
A Good Neighbour
On day a man was going on a trip. Suddenly robbers behind the rocks hit him. They took all the things he had with him. Then there was a man who worked in God's temple saw the hurt man. But he didn't help him. There was another man but he didn't help him too. There was a man from another country who saw the hurt man. He helped the hurt man. Jesus said you can be a neighbour to anyone who needs your help.
The lesson I learn from the story is I can be a neighbour to anyone who needs my help.
By Daniel
Monday, 3 April 2017
The Creation Story
On the first day God made the light. He called it day and he called the dark night. On the second day God made the sky. On the third day God made flowers, mountains, trees, islands, rivers and beaches. On the fourth day God made the fiery sun, sparkling moon and the dancing stars. On the fifth day God made the birds to glide in the sky and God made fish. On the sixth day God made man and animals. And on the seventh day God rested.
By Daniel
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