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Tuesday, 20 June 2017

Our Autumn Tree


The Autumn Tree looks beautiful and colourful. The Twirling Twirling Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and gold and yellow and brown leaves are gliding, fluttering and floating softly to the ground. The autumn tree is slowly losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare. There will be nothing left for them to wear.
                   
                                              By Daniel

3 comments:

  1. I like the way you 've used interesting words in your writing.

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  2. Wow son! I love the way you explain Autumn. You have learned and used a lot of descriptive words. Well done and keep up that.
    Mum and Dad, August and Marii

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  3. Great writing Daniel. The words you have chosen bring your story to life. I can see the leaves falling, twirling delicately from the Autumn tree.
    Keep up the fantastic work, I can't wait to see your next writing.

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